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*BUDAKATAK*
« on: January 15, 2010, 04:07:17 PM »
salam kepada semua...
Saya sedang melukis sebuah komik yang bertajuk "BUDAKATAK" yang merupakan 1 projek besar saya, dimana saya meletakkan sasaran yang tinggi, iaitu menjadikan komik ini sebuah komik
yang dibaca dan digemari oleh semua pembaca komik di dunia.

Sinopsis:

Komik ini mengisahkan tentang seorang budak separuh manusia separuh katak, Poppy yang mengembara bersama seorang doktor yang berjanji akan mencari jalan untuk memulihkan budak tersebut menjadi manusia biasa. Mereka bersama-sama memulakan sebuah pengembaraan mencari penawar untuk memulihkan  Poppy di dunia fantasi yang penuh misteri dan keseronokan.

Komik ini akan diterbitkan di bawah komik-M.

Taknak cerita panjang, jadi saya upload artwork2 budak katak disini.

Harap kawan-kawan kat pergh ni sudi singgah di sini. Terima kasih....








Itu sahaja untuk hari ini..... ^^
« Last Edit: January 15, 2010, 04:18:34 PM by innoc3nt21 »
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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2010, 04:28:24 PM »
rasa cambest, raw tapi best
ada kelainan, kipidap!!
walk away. u need to do that sometimes..

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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #2 on: January 15, 2010, 04:32:55 PM »
rasa cambest, raw tapi best
ada kelainan, kipidap!!


terima kasih!
dah bertambah bsemangat dah ni!
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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #3 on: January 15, 2010, 04:53:28 PM »
Hmm,artis baru ni.Ada kelainan dan keyakinan.
Bg aku,aku prefer komik mcm drpd komik mecha dan sci-fi.Yg ni pasti aku akan baca. :D

Komen aku-
-budak katak mukanya tak mcm katak pun?mcm biasa tgk muka katak tu.keroro-chan ke?kalau ni hero,make sure ko buat yg original.
-karekter2 kau kurang kearah ketimuran.identiti watak2 semua masih huru hara,ada yg nmpak mcm budak skolah jepun,ada yg nmpak mcm princess barbie bertudung,dan ada pulak mcm pirates.mmg kau bole campur2 dalam mencipta karekter.,namun kau kena jaga imej watak2 tersebut agar dekat dihati masyarakat kita. :)
Suka pelukis one piece ke?,tp jgn terover ikut ya. :p

Sasaran ko mmg bagus untuk menawan satu dunia,wlupun agak melampau.
Semoga berjaya!! :pompom:

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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #4 on: January 15, 2010, 05:15:23 PM »
Hmm,artis baru ni.Ada kelainan dan keyakinan.
Bg aku,aku prefer komik mcm drpd komik mecha dan sci-fi.Yg ni pasti aku akan baca. :D

Komen aku-
-budak katak mukanya tak mcm katak pun?mcm biasa tgk muka katak tu.keroro-chan ke?kalau ni hero,make sure ko buat yg original.
-karekter2 kau kurang kearah ketimuran.identiti watak2 semua masih huru hara,ada yg nmpak mcm budak skolah jepun,ada yg nmpak mcm princess barbie bertudung,dan ada pulak mcm pirates.mmg kau bole campur2 dalam mencipta karekter.,namun kau kena jaga imej watak2 tersebut agar dekat dihati masyarakat kita. :)
Suka pelukis one piece ke?,tp jgn terover ikut ya. :p

Sasaran ko mmg bagus untuk menawan satu dunia,wlupun agak melampau.
Semoga berjaya!! :pompom:


Oh! Oh!
terima kasih...

thanx sebab bg tips tu.. saya akan cuba gunakannya sebaik mungkin.

haha.. Sasaran tu utk motivasi diri..

thanx bro... nextime bg komen lg ya..

boleh saya perbaiki lg...
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« Reply #5 on: January 15, 2010, 05:42:46 PM »

Komen aku-
-budak katak mukanya tak mcm katak pun?mcm biasa tgk muka katak tu.keroro-chan ke?kalau ni hero,make sure ko buat yg original.

pakai muka hang kot froggy, baru nampak muka katak yang original :D

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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #6 on: January 15, 2010, 06:04:55 PM »
muka aku hensem woo..klu pakai aku cas rm100 per-page.wahahaha!!

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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #7 on: January 15, 2010, 06:06:13 PM »
muka aku hensem woo..klu pakai aku cas rm100 per-page.wahahaha!!

HAHAHA.. rugi! rugi!
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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #8 on: January 15, 2010, 07:30:06 PM »
Hi, I would say its a nice idea and concept. More improvement cam be make.

This is my personal opinion, hope you are not offended.

Comic its not really a good market to go worldwide. Due to the region and taste. As we can see, most of our local comic cannot be accepted by oversea, and hardly got market out there.

If you wan to go worldwide, then you got to think worldwide!

As we know now, major comic are dominate by US, Jap and Europe. HK and China are base on Chinese market, only asian region.

US comic are more violent. Japan comic are sexual explicit. Europe comic are more toward art and design. (base on majority)

I would say, do your market research well, and plan it nicely. For sure there its a way for success.

In terms of your design and concept, i would say, nothing much special or different then "Spiderman" or "Cicakman". And there its tons in the market. Idea and concept got to be strong and original (but now day... its kinna hard also, due to so many players).

All the best. :-)
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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #9 on: January 15, 2010, 10:22:26 PM »

bab2 katak ni froggy cukup sensitif...jgn buat main woo kalo dia marah dia kencing kt mata ko kang..abih butey matey..

bagus..sebuah komik yg cuba berfikir di luar kotak..tapi kena kerja keras lagi bab drawing...masih raw lagi tu..
sesama la kita kerja keras menaik taraf art kita ye...

selamat dtg ke dunia komik malaysia..terimalah realitinya
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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #10 on: January 16, 2010, 12:20:29 AM »
Comic its not really a good market to go worldwide. Due to the region and taste. As we can see, most of our local comic cannot be accepted by oversea, and hardly got market out there.

well, we are getting better and better now..not only animation, but local comic is improving as well...

we will definitely break down the barrier and it is only a matter of time..

we should be optimistic all the time, as nothing is certain...

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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #11 on: January 16, 2010, 12:21:26 AM »
haha.. dulu feeqry pun lebih kurang camnih jugak time masuk2 pergh dulu.. alhamdulillah setelah sekian lama bertapa terbit juga komiknya..

ni pengikut feeqry generasi kedua nih.. huhuhu.. kipidap!
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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #12 on: January 16, 2010, 01:52:03 AM »
Hi, I would say its a nice idea and concept. More improvement cam be make.

This is my personal opinion, hope you are not offended.

Comic its not really a good market to go worldwide. Due to the region and taste. As we can see, most of our local comic cannot be accepted by oversea, and hardly got market out there.

If you wan to go worldwide, then you got to think worldwide!

As we know now, major comic are dominate by US, Jap and Europe. HK and China are base on Chinese market, only asian region.

US comic are more violent. Japan comic are sexual explicit. Europe comic are more toward art and design. (base on majority)

I would say, do your market research well, and plan it nicely. For sure there its a way for success.

In terms of your design and concept, i would say, nothing much special or different then "Spiderman" or "Cicakman". And there its tons in the market. Idea and concept got to be strong and original (but now day... its kinna hard also, due to so many players).

All the best. :-)

Yup. I'm absolutely agree with u. It's kinda hard to make it as original as it is.. But I'm trying to make a concept which i had never read before.. I'm still green.. But I'm trying to make the story the best i could, which means a story which everyone can follow.. Not "syok sendiri"..
HAHAHA

Well, to go that far, it will take a lot of times and effort to go for the world..
I'm agreed with feeqry, that nowadays Malaysian's comic are growing better than before..
If we ddo not succeed to go for the world, at least we can open a space for the future Malaysian's comic artist to succeed our dreams..
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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #13 on: January 16, 2010, 01:55:27 AM »
haha.. dulu feeqry pun lebih kurang camnih jugak time masuk2 pergh dulu.. alhamdulillah setelah sekian lama bertapa terbit juga komiknya..

ni pengikut feeqry generasi kedua nih.. huhuhu.. kipidap!

Alhamdulillah... Aku harap aku akan berjaya publish mcm korang.. hehehe..
Time tu boleh la aku lepak dgn korang.. Hohoho
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« Reply #14 on: January 16, 2010, 01:58:38 AM »
well, we are getting better and better now..not only animation, but local comic is improving as well...

we will definitely break down the barrier and it is only a matter of time..

we should be optimistic all the time, as nothing is certain...


It's true...
It's true... ^^
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Re: *BUDAKATAK*
« Reply #15 on: January 16, 2010, 02:00:18 AM »
bab2 katak ni froggy cukup sensitif...jgn buat main woo kalo dia marah dia kencing kt mata ko kang..abih butey matey..

bagus..sebuah komik yg cuba berfikir di luar kotak..tapi kena kerja keras lagi bab drawing...masih raw lagi tu..
sesama la kita kerja keras menaik taraf art kita ye...

selamat dtg ke dunia komik malaysia..terimalah realitinya

orait! Sama2 kte usaha..

Terima kasih^^..
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« Reply #16 on: January 16, 2010, 03:24:49 AM »
I'm not trying to get into any debate what so ever, and I think kakitoon is one of those passionate and talented artist in his field. But I have to disagree somehow and yet agree to certain things.

Hi, I would say its a nice idea and concept. More improvement cam be make.

This is my personal opinion, hope you are not offended.

what make a bad or good artist is the knowledge and experience. It need spaces and time to grow. I'm not surprise the next  5 years this guy do wonders things. Like Scot Ross ex-Digital Domain founder said "eastern astist is also as good as western artist, what make us different is the experience".

Comic its not really a good market to go worldwide. Due to the region and taste. As we can see, most of our local comic cannot be accepted by oversea, and hardly got market out there.

If you wan to go worldwide, then you got to think worldwide!

Our local talents had made it outside... Dato Lat, Baba Chua to name a few... and the late Yasmin Ahmad (even though not in the same medium).

They made it because of what?
Good artistry and story telling that on par or better to that of global creative content. These a the sole key to recognition. I'm in advertising and the same rule still apply. Our local creative won global award because the idea is so freakin' good. We need to have good content no matter what medium we in.

How many time we read a good book or comic for that matter, that is so memorable, it became the talk of town. It is SO RARE... Baba Chua have a story that so griping (back in the era of 'Fantasi Magazine') that I still remember it till now, that is 15 to 17 years full of void.

As we know now, major comic are dominate by US, Jap and Europe. HK and China are base on Chinese market, only asian region.

US comic are more violent. Japan comic are sexual explicit. Europe comic are more toward art and design. (base on majority)

I would say, do your market research well, and plan it nicely. For sure there its a way for success.
I don't know about that. I read Scott McLoud book's 'Making Comic', and he speak otherwise.

In terms of your design and concept, i would say, nothing much special or different then "Spiderman" or "Cicakman". And there its tons in the market. Idea and concept got to be strong and original (but now day... its kinna hard also, due to so many players).

All the best. :-)
I agree to that. nicely said.

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« Reply #17 on: January 18, 2010, 10:48:13 AM »
Sorry guys, if I being putting too much negative.  :p

Not trying to be negative, just giving out some opinion.

But I do see alot of improvement on Malaysia comic industries, especially the appearance of Gempak.

One of my artiest also very gila on comic, and last year he was one of the finalise on the comic competition organise by Gempak. And there its alot of improvement in our comic industry he say.. (too bad we were unable to go KL to support him... )

One of the element we should improve its the cartoon originality and style. I seen alot of comic, which mostly will either follow US or Japan style. Event the idea also. In order for us to go out in the market and well known, we must focus alot of idea and style. Which could make us different.. well, must also look into the point where can capture majority market.

Jus my 5 cent opinion.  :p
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« Reply #18 on: January 18, 2010, 11:37:02 AM »
well, no problem kakitoon..this is a forum after all..hehe... :-D

but most of your words sound right to me.... :)

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« Reply #19 on: January 19, 2010, 04:41:47 PM »
Aku bkn nak tunjuk pandai, tapi apa yg leh aku komen, komik ko ni sgt keras, kelopak mata aku kejang, kena banyak berlatih lagi. Bila tangan or jari dah boleh bergemalai, baru redup mata org memandang. Amik obat!
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